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Hello to all! I'd like to take the time to thank all of my devoted fans for taking a sneak peak at my latest fanfiction. This is a story about Ace D. Copular, and Buttercup Utonium. This story takes place in a subway and high school setting. So it is obvious that it takes place when Buttercup is in high school. Ace is in high school too. He is just one year older than her but they are in the same grade. Even if you don't like subways and high school settings, I ask that you give my story a chance. I hope you enjoy "Meeting in the subway." I will be posting it as soon as I finish chapter one.
This is the introduction to my latests fanficition. Comments would be appreciated!
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DarkRoseDiamond123 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
How could you be a year older in the same grade? :confused:
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Oh it's when your birthday is in a different part of the year. Thanks for reading, I'm posting chapter two now, please keep reading and commenting.:)
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Obiwana Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist
i never really watched the power puff girls so i don't know who ace d copular is but it sounds interesting.
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
he's the leader of the gang green gang. Remember? would you be willing to read my story?:D
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Obiwana Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist
no don't remember but ill read it any way
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ok have you read chapter one?
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Obiwana Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist
yeah it is good would be nice if the next one was a bit longer
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
oh I take it you want to read more of it?
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Obiwana Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist
yes
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zzSnowWhiteQueenzz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
That's awesome, but I really don't have time to read any stories. Maybe later.
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
why don't you have the time? If you don't then you should make, the time.;)
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zzSnowWhiteQueenzz Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
I'm far too busy to make time. But perhaps later, because if I read something now I couldn't even afford to write a normal comment.
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
it's really short here's the link. Don't forget to leave a comment.[link]
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zzSnowWhiteQueenzz Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
The link is wrong, it's from this journal. And I've read your journal.
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
sorry I tested it this time.[link]
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zzSnowWhiteQueenzz Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
Done. I would have left a longer critique, but I had little to work with.
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SouthernWriter2 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Not my kind of story, but it sounds interesting.
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
thank you, I could tell you more about it if you like but please give me a chance.
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PseudonymousRMY Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting, it's been a while since I last heard about the Powerpuff Girls :P
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you, I hope you'll do me a favor by reading my fanfiction. In case you didn't read the comment below, it takes place when both Ace and Buttercup are in high school. Ace had a relationship with Medusa the following year and in the beginning of the fanfiction he talks about why he broke up with her and says that things just weren't "working out." Then (I'm not sure which of these events I'm putting first.) Buttercup is getting ready for bed, and as she's washing her face she's thinking about all the boys she's dated (Mitch Elmer and Butch) as well as a few boys from citiesville, that she met online, particularly a guy named Spade.(Not Ace's kid, just a goth oc I made.) Ace is introduced as a new student at Pokey Oaks high, and later that night they bump into each other on the subway. Rather than asking her out on a typical date, he moves toward her and kisses her. That's what I have so far in my mind. What do you think?
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PseudonymousRMY Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
May work out, haha, sounds complicated, but funny
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
funny so you like it right?
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PseudonymousRMY Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
yeah
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
that's awesome, I hope you'll make the time to read it.:)
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PseudonymousRMY Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
okay
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HoodedAndromeda Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool :) I haven't been able to find any GOOD fanfics lately. :P So I'm happy to read and review :D
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you for calling my fanfiction "good." I really like how it's turning out in my head. What I have in my mind so far is that Ace is a new student at pokey oaks high school, and he ends up being in Buttercup's class. They end up setting right next to each other and have all their classes together.(It's a bit hypocritical for a love story to have the same schedule, but it's just something I wanted to try, so he could walk her to all of her classes.) Then they keep meeting in the subway, and eventually he either asks her out first or kisses her.(I haven't decided which yet, what do you think would be better?) Then she takes him home to meet the Professor, and he doesn't approve of their relationship so they write love letters to each other that are either delivered from house to house or left in the train, because she always rides in the same car in the subway. Does this sound good so far? I think it does. :iconbuttercupplz: :iconaceplz:
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HoodedAndromeda Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sounds amazing :D All the 1s I've read recently r like the same story over and over and over with a few rlly cool bits sprinkled in there. I think it wud b more like Ace 2 immediately go in 4 the kill, (Kiss her)and then they wud start going out. I think u've got a gr8 start so far :D I am SUCH a hopeless romantic and a writer. Actually, I wrote a story 4 English class which a couple of my other teachers read and apparently rlly liked :) (It wuznt a fanfic tho it wuz a thriller which isn't usually my style, but tht wuz the genre required). Anyway, I'm excited 2 read this :D Plus the fact tht u r involving stuff like highschools and subways is cool 2 cuz it makes me picture a big city- in the rain. Lol! I like watcha got :D
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BlueMoonScorpio Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you for your kind words. I think that he should go straight for the kill to. That seems like more his style. What do you think?
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HoodedAndromeda Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Np :) I couldn't agree more! Ace is very... Well, Ace. It works. Good Luck :D
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